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This month in email: January 2012

Hello email lovers! Each month I'll be putting together a recap of all the interesting and noteworthy emails that happen to come across my inbox.  To get things started, here's a quick rundown of the messages that stood out to me in January.  Click on the black links to see the emails. Enjoy!


  • I like how Ballard Designs encouraged subscribers to join their social networks (including Pinterest!) with this creative, textured email -- and I LOVE the banner at the bottom asking me to add my birthday to my customer profile for a special birthday surprise!

  • J.Jill suggested two casual looks for Superbowl Sunday using both the Giants and Patriots team colors. A pretty creative tie-in.

  • This email from Burton does a great job of using animation to call out features of their new jacket.  Check out the email here, and the gif here.

  • TO THE BATPAGE >>  This Batman promo from MSN is great!  It's eye-catching, breaks away from a traditional frame to utilize inbox space nicely, and even includes a directional line to guide your eye through the content.  Really great stuff.

  • Honda sent a pre-release of their epic Ferris Bueller Superbowl commercial to subscribers a week before the big game.   And for that, I say danke schoen.

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  • Pun of the month goes to Piperlime!  And this one's a twofer. 

  • Lucky Jeans announced their new blog launch through a personal letter from their style director.

  • This email from J.Jill does a great job of incorporating a video gif into the hero, and I also love the series of static images below that helps convey the concept for Outlook users (who can't see the gif).

  • Neiman Marcus also featured a few video gifs this month, to highlight some clips from Milan Fashion Week.  In this case, the gifs really help to show the flow and movement of the fabric on the runway. Check out the email here, and the gif here.

  • There's nothing worse than someone forgetting your name.  Dell's attempt to add value through personalization backfired because they didn't have my information.

  • Gourmet grilled cheese sandwiches are a hot topic these days, and Crate & Barrel does a good job of serving up this cheesetastic email with a recipe and a special section for "What you need to prep this recipe."  Nice way to pull a themed email together.

  • JCPenney sent this somewhat cryptic email with a lot of "NOs" and a mysterious message that "Things are changing 2.1.12." What the email is referring to is JCPenney's new marketing approach, and the blowing up of their old brand.  I'm really excited to see what these changes will mean for their email program.  [Spoiler: of their first three emails in February, two have been animated, and one is a horizontal scroller - way to come out of the gate swinging!] 

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  • "Dude food" - it's "Mantastic!" -- Some really cute copywriting in this football themed Betty Crocker email.

  • West Elm did a great job of using popular bloggers to show their office furniture in real-life applications.  They used bloggers to choose gift ideas over the holiday season last year, too.

  • This Harley-Davidson email includes a really neat animated gif to show all the different customization options.  See the email here, and the gif here.

  • Clorox Classrooms asked subscribers to "Give us a grade!" in a survey request email.  Very cute copy.

  • The Container Store made Fortune's 100 Best Companies to Work For list, for the thirteenth time in a row - and sent a fun shout out email to celebrate.

  • charity: water always does such a nice job with their newsletters, and this year-end wrap-up was no exception.  Nicely done!

  • Brooks Brothers promotes their monogrammed shirts with a little presidential trivia.

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  • These boots were made for horizontal scrolling at DSW.

  • Helzberg Diamonds also tried out a horizontal scroller this month - with clear arrows and a flowing ribbon image to help encourage the scroll.

  • This Banana Republic email is NOT a side-scroller, but the cut-off images on the right and the arrow are reminiscent of one, indicating there's more to see.

  • Wiggle wiggle wiggle wiggle wiggle... West Elm proves you don't always have to get complicated with animation to add a little delight. See the email here, and the animation in action here.

  • If one nav is good, then FIVE is better!  Backcountry included 5 sets of winter gear links divided by outdoor conditions (and a thermometer to show the temps).  Cool way to shop.

  • Ugg Australia made an interesting attempt to mobilize this recent email.  It seems what they were trying to achieve was an email that would scale nicely into an iPhone - so they created a 640px email with HUGE text and images that would scale down to the iPhone's 320px mobile screen beautifully.  Unfortunately, while the iPhone experience will be great, that's about the only advantage to this.  Android devices do not scale (and only display the first 480px of screen width) and the desktop version appears awkward this way, stretching all the way down to 2,600px in length.  A better bet for optimizing across devices would have been to design the email for 480px of width, which would still appear great on an Android and a desktop, while scaling to look fine on an iPhone as well.

  • Charles David's "sale got even bigger" and so did their email - coming in at a whopping 760px wide.

  • Dillards accidentally sent an email to thank me for purchasing something I did not purchase. They promptly sent out an "oopsy" email - and also replaced the image in the original email with one that said "oops! We sent you this email by mistake."  Although I appreciate their prompt recognition of the error, their oopsy is still missing a clear apology for the mistake/inconvenience.

  • In what might be the most relevant email -- ever, Albertsons sent me a reminder to pick up some supplies before our big northwest snowstorm last month.  Really, so smart!  
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Alright, that's all I've got for now.  See you next month!


From desktop to desk-tination

0719_Jetsetter.pngFrom: Jetsetter
Subject Line: Memorable Rooms With a View: NYC, Peru, Vail, South Africa and More
Date: Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Jetsetter's emails always offer a great source of inspiration; sometimes it's about places I can be other than my desk, but mostly it's their smart use of photography, typography and design.

What sets Jetsetter apart from other travel emails is the proportion of space they dedicate to photography. Rather than taking a grid approach to all the getaways they're touting, they let each location have the same visual weight. I love that they are far enough apart then even when you're looking at one location, you can see the beginning of the next image, making you want to scroll and scroll and scroll.

We all can learn from the way Jetsetter treats their "link farm." They've done a fantastic job giving enough space to make clear groups of links, and used a contrast between color and size to define give importance to the title of each section.

And we can't ignore the fact that this template will work well in both mobile and desktop environments. Jetsetter understands their on-the-go audience and delivers an excellent experience whether their customers are at their desk or a "Lush Urban Escape in Brazil."

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Let's Talk Hair...and Animated Gifs!

From: bumbleandbumble.com
Subject Line: Obsessed? We are...
Date: Tuesday, June 28, 2011

062811_BumbleAndBumble_b.jpg I'm a fan of animated gifs in emails--if done right. You don't want an animation to distract from a message, but you DO want it to grab your attention "just so." This bumbleandbumble.com email has the right amount of attention-grabbing movement for me. Each time one of the images squiggles, my eye moves to read the quote. I love the illustrations, especially the one in the middle - I mean, who doesn't want hair like that?!

I also love the simple layout of the products at the bottom so that I know what the bottle looks like (beyond the illustration), the cost, and and the ability to "shop" all in one nice little area.

I'm also a big viewer of emails on my iPhone, and I love that this one makes my device dance.


Fourth of July Fireworks Fun!

From: Pottery Barn Kids
Subject Line: Last Day to Save 10% + Fourth of July Sale Starts Today!
Date: Tuesday, June 28, 2011

From: west elm
Subject Line: New markdowns! Up to 70% off
Date: Wednesday, June 29, 2011


The 4th of July presents the perfect opportunity to use animated GIFs in your email campaigns, and these two examples from Pottery Barn Kids and west elm do not disappoint! Particularly impressive is west elm's effort: it is only 4 frames and therefore quick-loading. The entire creative office at Responsys is completely mesmerized! To see the full emails click here for west elm and here for Pottery Barn Kids.


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A Rapturous Email from Photoworks SF

20110517_photoworks.jpgFrom: Photoworks SF
Subject Line: Judgement Day Printing Sale
Date: Tuesday, May 17, 2011


The supposed End of the World has come and passed, yet here we all are. This email from Photoworks has also lived on (in my mind) post "The Rapture". I like to give extra bonus points and a big shout-out whenever I see a successful email campaign from a small business and Photoworks SF deserves huge kudos. I love that they even thought to capitalize on Judgement Day - the humor of the copy and AMAZING hero shot are to be commended as well.

FYI, for all photographers out there, Photoworks SF does
hands down the best photo printing I have ever seen. A little pricey, but worth every dang penny because they work miracles. Even photos taken by an amateur (me) with a crappy disposable camera can look half way decent with Photoworks developing.

Off With Her Head!

From: Bliss
Subject Line: 30% off body-baring bests: 2 days only!
Date: Thursday, May 12, 2011

0511_Bliss_Full.jpgThis email from Bliss had me, um... scratching my head with confusion over the cropped image of the model. I understand that the body-slimming wrap is supposed to be the focus, but my attention instantly went to what was missing from the image: the model's head. There are mountains of A/B tests and case studies on the web concluding that photos of people and a human element help consumers to relate and engage with a product, and in this case the woman is there... though her head is awkwardly missing - so readers aren't able to make a connection via eye contact. The result is more unsettling than selling.

However, sometimes the full image isn't available or doesn't fit into the design - so what do you do? In Bliss' example, I might have rearranged the placement and sizing of the text so that the woman's body came up to the top of the message area, cutting her head off by the design's natural frame. Though, there are many other ways to design around these problems, so if you find yourself in this position, here are some examples I found of creative ways to use poor dismembered humans in your design and make it work.

Crop To It:
In the first example below (left), the email is featuring shoes - so the rest of the model is essentially unnecessary. To make the close up cropped images work out, Jimmy Choo contains each of the photos in a grid so that the models' legs are being cut off by the boundaries of the design. This anchors the images into the design without an awkward feeling of something missing. At center, this Coach email zeroes in on the bag while the model's head is being cut off, but the crop is open enough so that you can still see the model's smile - providing just enough of a happy emotion to form a human connection. Lastly, this Mac email (right) brings in two differently cropped images of a face, giving us a near complete woman in two chunks that are nicely composed within the email.

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CB2 is riding high

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From: CB2
Subject Line: Introducing our new vintage-inspired modern city bikes.
Date: Tuesday, March 22, 2011

What's not to love with this cute email from CB2? It jumped out at me for a few reasons:
1) The bright colors
2) The fresh imagery
3) The well-supporting secondary products
4) CB2 makes bikes?!

And when I got home from work, the CB2 catalog had arrived with the same image on the cover! Looks like they have their marketing channels well-synced.

The only thing I would recommend they do differently is (of course) include more HTML where possible.

From Print to Email

From: American Eagle Outfitters
Subject Line: Over The Top! Last Chance - 25% Off AE Tanks, T's & Shirts.
Date: Wednesday, March 9th, 2011

From: Kate Spade
Subject Line: deborah loves...
Date: Wednesday, March 16th, 2011

From: FreePeople.com
Subject Line: Which Girl are You?
Date: Wednesday, February 9th, 2011

As a formally trained and experienced print designer, jumping into email has been an interesting transition. I had to lose the xacto knife, file away my paper samples, and change my Photoshop unit preferences to pixels. *Sniff*

The thought of designing in tables while background images didn't show up sounded terrifying to me. And with there being less email-safe fonts than there are web-safe fonts, I wondered how I would make anything look good. Fortunately, it proved to not be so bad. Just because I was designing for email, didn't mean it had to look like an email. I was able to find a lot of ways to utilize my print skills and expertise when designing for the inbox by keeping the following 4 tips in mind:

1. Design with type.
With limited resources, you can still spruce up your typography but playing with sizes, widths, colors, and placement. Using fancy fonts is also possible, it'll just have to be an image, of course.

2. Invite them in with textures.
Although I no longer have a need for recycled stock or Lettra 120gsm (does anyone else fondle paper like I do?), I can still incorporate those types of textures in a design. If you want to avoid using texture in the background, use textures far enough around text that images along the borders (top, bottom, left, and right) can be sliced. Adding subtle gradients can also add just the right amount of depth.

3. Break that grid.
Just because you're coding in tables doesn't mean it has to look like you're coding in tables. You can easily add zest by breaking out of a grid with what seems like overlapping images. Slightly rotating images are also a way to disguise a table-based design.

4. Lovely photos and colors will go a long way.
Don't forget that visual stimulation can occur in simple ways like stunning photography and a fresh color palette.

Check out the samples below that incorporate great photography, layout, colors, type, and textures. Fellow print designers, be inspired!

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Stuck on Solestruck

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From: Solestruck
Subject Line: Thanks for your purchase at Solestruck.
Date: Sunday, March 13, 2011

From: Solestruck
Subject Line: Your Solestruck order has been shipped
Date: Monday, March 14, 2011

Diary of my latest shoe-shopping adventure...
Saturday 3/12/2011: I pop into Villians and spot these leopard-print, mega-tall platform booties and I think it's love and first sight. But I'm only 99% sure that I have to have them, so I decide to sleep on it...
Sunday 3/13/2011: I'm 100% certain that I have to have them, so I head back to Villians. Too late! Somebody else with unwavering convictions has snatched them from me! Fortunately the nice people of Villians point me in the right direction (maybe they should actually be named Heros).* Following their advice I go to Solestruck.com where indeed they have my shoes. Instantly, after clicking "Complete Purchase" I received the charming Purchase Confirmation email. (Note the no sales tax or shipping charges!)
Monday 3/14/2011: Less than 24 hours later I received equally adorable Shipping Confirmation email. I love the prompt service of Solestruck and the execution of their emails: the cute receipt and "SHIPPED" stamp visuals, plus the feel-goodiness of shopping with (in their own words) a "small, independent and family-run" business.
Wednesday 3/16/2011: Package arrives from UPS!

*It was a win/win/win situation... Because they were so helpful at Villians, and I really had the urge to buy something I got some sneakers for the hubby.

Date TBD: When will I have the guts to wear 6 inch platforms?

iPad 2, by Ernest Hemingway

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From: Apple
Subject Line: Introducing iPad 2.
Date: Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Our subscribers communicate via text messages, IMs and 140-character Tweets. Apple knows this. You can tell by the way they message their iPad 2. There are really no complete sentences here, just three-word maximum data points! It's pure Ernest Hemingway.

"Thinner. Lighter. Faster. FaceTime. Smart Covers. 10-hour battery. Coming March 11. Starting at $499." 

While I appreciate clean and airy graphics as much as the next aesthete, I would observe that the thumb here is so antiseptic as to feel vaguely strange and off-putting. 




Cooking up a Great Preheader

Sender: chasing fireflies
Subject Line: See what's cooking in our Toy Shop!
Date: Thursday, December 02, 2010

With so many people viewing email on mobile devices, the importance of a great preheader has become increasingly more relevant. In this email from chasing fireflies, the clever use of adding my name dynamically to the preheader made it stand out from the pack during my daily rapid scroll through the inbox, plus the copy had a cute and familiar feeling to it - like it could have been from a buddy... to quote Dale Carneghie from How to Win Friends and Influence People: "Remember that a man's name is to him the sweetest and most important sound in the English language".

Unfortunately, the nit-picking email marketer in me can't help but notice that the rest of the email's execution leaves room for improvement. The entire hero/body of the email is one image slice, that when clicked, leads to the toys landing page of their site and features a foosball table, not the incredibly cute kitchen from the email. The poor coordination between the email and landing page create further frustration as the main and secondary products are not labeled in the email, so it is another challenge to try to find them once you are on the site. Additionally, I believe that if one wants to be a player in the Email Marketing world, it's best to leave off the little logo for your email marketing platform (no offense meant to Vertical Response).


It is a seriously cute little kitchen though... Santa might have to be alerted! ;)
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Anthropologie Hits the Streets

From: Anthropologie
Subject Line: Outfits, on film.
Date: Tuesday, October 12, 2010

If you haven't see it yet, check out the homepage on Anthropologie.com. It's simply brilliant. Rather than just put up a slideshow of their fave looks for fall, they created a live-action street scene, complete with pedestrians and a well-placed cab.

There are five vignettes to choose from: Flower Shop, Bookstore, Cafe, Bike Ride or Bakery. And while each is really short, they're stunning to watch again and again. (My only comment is that the model isn't actually riding her bike in the Bike Ride video. Maybe she had a flat?)

As much as I love the site execution, I have to say that the email could have done a better job of enticing me to click by incorporating the five vignette titles. The subject line is great: Outfits, on film. But the body copy is so subtle that the true beauty of the site experience doesn't really come through in the email. I would have loved to see them figure out a way to bring the movement of the homepage to the email. But then again, I clicked. So they're clearly doing something right!

Tips for Designing with HTML Text

From: Pottery Barn Kids
Subject Line: Trick or treat! Costumes starting at $29 + treat bags ship free
Date: Thursday, August 19, 2010

From: Nature Made
Subject Line: Men's Health: The Benefits of Fish Oil for Men
Date: Friday, June 18, 2010



A few tips for designing with HTML text:

Use HTML-safe fonts.
Using fonts such as Arial, Georgia, Verdana and Times will allow the copy to be coded as HTML text instead of as an image, thus allowing the copy to be viewable with images disabled. If you find system text utterly boring or off-brand, we suggest using your special font for the headline only -- just make sure to include an alt tag on that image when coding.


Use solid colors behind HTML text.
Outlook does not display background-images (images that appear behind HTML text). So keep that area free of gradients, patterns or images. Outlook does, however, show background-colors -- so the color behind your HTML text doesn't have to be white. In this example, notice that the image behind the system text does not show up in Outlook. Instead, you see a solid color (that you can choose). It's particularly important to apply a background color behind your images if your system text is white.


Keep copy away from rounded corners.
When designing with rounded corners, keep in mind that the portion of the box that includes the corners will need to be cut as an image. So keep your copy outside of that image in order to code that copy as HTML text.


Know that HTML text will expand differently (horizontally and vertically) in different browsers.
Therefore: 1) make sure to leave adequate room at the end of your paragraphs in case a word needs to jump to the next line, 2) don't cut your paragraph too close to images, 3) make sure your line height is at least equal to the font size and 4) leave some extra space below your copy block.



New Trend: Diagonal Text


From: JCPenny
Subject Line: $4.99 Shipping! Make A Splash This Summer
Date: Thursday, May 20, 2010

From: Ann Taylor
Subject Line: Ann Taylor & InStyle Present Wear-To-Work Chic Trends + Enter For A Chance To Win A $500 Ann Taylor Gift Card
Date: Friday, May 21, 2010

From: The Limited
Subject Line: SAVE this Memorial Day Weekend With These Special Offers, Going On Now!
Date: Thursday, May 27, 2010

I've noticed a new design trend: diagonal text. It can really add interest to a design when used properly. My suggestion is to keep text to a minimum and make sure the fonts are simple and large for readability. I also recommend only using this tactic on headlines while keeping your body copy HTML text to avoid images disabled issues.


Anthropologie's New Look

From: Anthropologie

Subject Line: Beach-bound outfits.
Date: Thursday, May 13, 2010

Subject Line: Outfits, at once utilitarian and sweet.
Date: Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Subject Line: Frills and florals for your feminine side.
Date: Saturday, May 22, 2010

Anthropologie has updated their look. New elements include a script headline, color splat, faded typewriter text and a broken up hero image. While the designs are nice to look at, I find the headlines difficult to read. Also, none of the fonts are HTML fonts, so images must be enabled in order to read the email. Is it worth having a great design if it means more work for your subscribers? I'd love to get other people's opinions, share your thoughts!


A Fresh Take on Email Design




From: Anthropologie
Subject Line: Rooms with a view
Date: Saturday, March 20, 2010

Leave it to Anthropologie to come up with this quirky, fresh and unexpected design. It's like a breath of fresh spring air delivered directly to my inbox. I absolutely LOVE how the products pop off the cardboard backgrounds in the hero. That said, there are a few tweaky things that stick out to me. The shop links are perfectly placed albeit they're not the strongest calls-to-action. IMHO, clear and direct would have been a better way to go. The soft language and style of the links make them appear as part of the editorial copy vs. shop now entry points.

I'm a fan of the "papered planes" secondary message because it's really clean and a nice complement to the busy hero. (Notice the clear and direct CTA: Shop Wallpaper. That's what I think would have worked better in the hero). But the layer-cake effect with the bottom messages feels disconnected from the hero, even though the headline is "Home in 4 Levels".

The landing page goes for a "shop this room" approach that groups bedding, furniture, lighting and curtains together so you can literally select all the items in that room that you like. I guess it would have been cool to see that approach translated into email somehow vs. going with the looooong scrolling design.

Click Me, I'm Irish

From: Puma
Subject Line: 25% Off - Lucky You!
Date: Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Sports-style brand Puma made a bold statement with its recent St. Patty's Day email. Often tame with its holiday creative--this heart-adorned Valentine's Day message comes to mind--Puma opted to forgo the predictable shamrock graphics in favor of something far more striking.

The creative features an image of a dozing leprechaun and his anonymous, stocking-clad guest, sprawled over one another in the remains of the evening's merriment, with the headline "You Don't Have to be Irish to Get Lucky." In the center of all this is a single sneaker, dangling on the woman's foot. I suppose this technically makes it an on-body product shot, and therefore one of the more provocative of its kind in recent memory.

Now, some may argue that this in poor taste (or even just stupid). There's probably a case to be made there. It's got the same kind of tongue-in-cheek, not-so-subversive fratty humor that you see everywhere from faux-thrift store t-shirts to men's body wash ads which, even if you find them funny, can be tiresome in their ubiquity.

Whether the creative appeals to you or not, however, it's undeniable that Puma takes a smart risk by shifting toward this type of edgier messaging. The brand speaks in a more relevant way to a coveted demographic, namely dudes with disposable income in their twenties and early thirties.

Puma has also created content that's interesting enough (or at least startling enough) to be shared and commented on by the same demographic. In our office, it was forwarded around and definitely became the topic of conversation--not because of the discount, but because of the imagery. This kind of conversation can both increase brand awareness and act as a vehicle to spread the sale message.

Additionally, Puma manages to differentiate itself in the inbox from similar brands and similar sale messaging. A significant fact to note is that this message was sent two weeks before St. Patty's Day, when the only evidence of the holiday seemed to be the Guiness display at the grocery store. By sending earlier, Puma got a jump on other retailers competing for attention around a similar type of message.

Ultimately, this type of messaging wont work for all brands and certainly wont resonate with all subscribers. You have to give credit to Puma for recognizing and speaking to a part of its audience, even with the inherent risk involved in moving away from safer options. No matter what your brand, it never hurts to examine new ways to make your messaging stand out and appeal to your followers. Who knows? You might just get lucky in a way you never expected.

Time for a DKNY Makeover?

From: DKNY.com
Subject Lines: Various
Date: Monday February 1, 2010 - Monday, March 1, 2010

DKNY seems be stuck in a design rut. Since summer of 2009, I've been seeing a reoccurring trend in their designs (an image of a group of girls taken at the same distance & camera angle, paired with a headline). Every now and then they'll throw in a different email like a sale message or something for purses, but overall the repetitive design style has lost my interest. I might suggest trying some new & creative imagery, having the girls break out of the grid, adding in some color or additional imagery or trying a new template structure.


Embrace New Ideas

From: BananaRepublic.com
Subject Line: Chino goes chic-every day of the week
Date: Tuesday, February 16, 2010

I really like the originality of this design. The partial image with an arrow to "See More" really grabbed my interest.

It can be difficult to think up new ideas for email. When the "horizontal scrolling email" was introduced everyone thought, "Why didn't I think of that?!" I urge you to find your own unique ideas and styles. Set yourself apart and watch user engagement soar!


Eye-Opening Email

From: Clinique
Subject Line: 3 tips to make eyes pop | FREE Shipping + 2 FREE minis!*
Date: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

From: Clinique
Date: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

I was thinking about buying some eye shadow -- easy right? Nope. There's matte, sheer, shimmer, gloss, pearl, powder, stick, cream, roll-on, liquid... and the list goes on. Makeup can be a bit overwhelming, so I was glad to see Clinique's eye-opening tips included in their email. The jumbo-sized products take me back to my pre-school picture books when life was a bit simpler, and there's plenty of clean, white space that leave me feeling calm and relaxed. I can totally do this.

The Eye Shadow Duo? I can rock that. And now I know how to put it on like a pro! As an added bonus, clicking on the Shop Now button takes me directly to the Eye Shadow Duo page and right below the product information, there's a How to Use tab with instructions, a Video tab with a demo and an Expert Tips tab that shows me how to bring out the best in my eyes.

Providing product tips increases my confidence and makes me much more likely to buy. I still have to make the all-important decision of matte verses shimmer, but at least I'll know how to put it on once I do. Thanks, Clinique!

Apple's Stunning Designs

From: Apple
Subject Line: Fitness made fun with iPod and iPod gear.
Date: Wednesday, January 13, 2010

From: Apple
Subject Line: Sounds like love. Give iPod this Valentine's Day.
Date: Sunday, January 31, 2010



There's no doubt that Apple has AWESOME design sense. Every email I get from them is breathtaking:
  • They use vibrant, crisp and creative imagery
  • Their newsletters have a great sense of flow and balance
  • They're often using new creative treatments like having their images break out of the grid
  • They include interactive/eye-catching treatments like ratings and videos
  • They're not always about the "Hard Sell" -- Apple "Adds Value," as we would say at Smith-Harmon, by providing informative content with "Did you Know" sections
  • They optimize for viewing without images by using HTML text in the majority of their emails
But have you noticed that they're missing a few key best practices? Such as:
  • A preheader
  • A View this Email with Images link
  • Social/Sharing Options
I think a few of those small tweaks could show even more activity for them. But awesome job Apple, you are an inspiration!

I Resolve to Love Kate Spade.






From: kate spade
Subject Line: i resolve to wear out my passport
Date: Thursday, January 7, 2010

From: kate spade
Subject Line: i resolve to sing in the rain
Date: Thursday, January 14, 2010

Simple, clean and fresh. What a perfect way to start off a new year. Kate Spade is carrying this "i resolve..." handle throughout all their emails this month and I love it. Everything about this email gives me room to breathe. From the photography to the typography, and the free shipping top promo to the social footer. My fave is the "i resolve to sing in the rain". Given that I'm practically rowing a boat to my local coffee joint because of all the rain, the timing on that one was perfection. My only gripe is the landing page experience. When you click on the "Shop the Collection" link, it takes you to a pretty little landing page with a few rain essentials... and a few randoms (why is there a necklace on this page? is it waterproof?). Wish they had more of a selection to really tell the rainy day story. They have two jackets, one boot, two bags and an umbrella. Makes me wonder what a Macy's or a Piperlime or a Nordstroms could do with this type of story, since they have so much more to choose from.

'Tis the Season for a Site Launch?

From: Staples
Subject Line: Check out our new look!
Date: Monday, December 14, 2009

I just can't decide if the timing on this email was a hit or a miss. On the one hand, it offers a break from all the holiday madness hitting my inbox. And since Staples isn't exactly where I do my gift shopping, maybe it was smart to offer a breath of fresh air that doesn't scream HOLIDAY. On the other hand, by sending this email during peak holiday times they run the risk of people overlooking it completely as they search for FREE SHIPPING, SAVE, SALE, etc. etc. Starting out the new year with a new look would have made so much sense. Especially as people get back to the office and realize they need more post-its, pens, folders and what not.

Stepping back from the timing debate, I think the design and copy of this email are stellar. I love the simplicity and easy-to-see callouts that point to the new features. Best of all, when you click on the Visit Staples.com button, you're taken to the homepage where the first story you see supports the new look messaging. I heart follow-through.

Mmm...Cozy.

From: Martin + Osa
Subject Line: All Sweaters 50% Off Now Through Sunday, December 6
Date: Thursday, December 03, 2009

After my recent post chiding Kohl's for its imprudent use of a brightly colored background, I thought I'd offer a more pleasant example. This email from Martin + Osa takes the same simple approach as Kohl's--solid background, large headline, one message--but look what a difference a little texture makes. Don't you love the subtle sweater pattern? A well-done and simple photograph like this turns an otherwise rote email into something special by introducing a sensory aspect. As an added bonus, it's a perfect way to get more mileage out of your creative. In this case, that pretty orange isn't just a nice background; it actually echoes the message of the email.


I Can Resist Everything Except Temptation...

From: Williams-Sonoma
Subject Line: 1 Day Only: 50% Off Ebelskiver Filled Pancake Pan Online & In Stores
Date: Friday, December 4, 2009

I always thought this was a Mae West quote, but The Googles informs me that it was actually attributed Oscar Wilde. But that's besides the point...  :)

During the holiday season I get such a ridiculous amount of Emails, that it really takes something special for me to take notice. This one from Williams-Sonoma totally did it for me. I was completely drawn in by the scrumptious looking hero image featuring those little chocolate-filled pancakes drowning in caramel sauce (I think I'm gaining weight just looking at the picture!). Also, the marketing aspect is completely spot-on with the 1-Day Deal 50% Off - I'm excited to see if there will be more 1-Day Deals. In any event, I totally feel the sense of urgency... must get now! And I'm not the only one: two fellow Smith-Harmon bloggers (who will rename nameless) are planning to stop by their nearest Williams-Sonoma after work today to buy said Ebelskiver pan.

Lady in Red

From: Papyrus
Subject Line: 20% off Custom Printing + Friends & Family Sale Days
Date: Thursday, November 26, 2009

This is one of the most beautiful emails I've received so far this holiday season. I love how Papyrus took a monochromatic color scheme and turned it into a piece of art - red is so stylish in this email design. What really grabs my attention is how the color gradient fades so you can read the copy clearly. The rest of the image speaks for itself - it's the holidays, aren't you excited about those gifts?

At first, I thought this email was too good to be true. However, after digging a little deeper, I started to notice that there are some confusing features to this promotion. First of all, the CTA doesn't take me to a store locator - instead, I arrive on the company homepage. (And frankly, it's not as visually stunning as the email). Second, why is the model practically stepping on the promo codes? I would expect to see this prominently displayed in the main message. These are very important pieces of information vital to the functionality of this email as a printable coupon and an online discount.

Finally, the lack of a second CTA to an online sale makes me wonder if the folks at Papyrus are using this email to push customers to go out and visit their stores. It's a good test, but if this is the case, why offer an online sale when there is hardly anything directing you to it?

Gilt Groupey

From: Gilt Groupe
Subject Line: Valentino Pret-a-Porter, Jonathan Kelsey, Jewelry by Isharya Starts Today at Noon ET
Date: Wednesday, November 25, 2009

If you like beautiful things and you don't already get emails from Gilt Groupe, you should. Shouldn't. Should. Shouldn't. Should...

As an industry person, I like the mails for two primary reasons:
(1) They are able to both maintain a glossy image and promote relevant content within a templatized vehicle format. I don't know how many hours marketing and brand folks argue about the impossibility of brand value retention and templatization peacefully co-existing. Here they do.
(2) They've developed a super superfooter. The "ALSO FROM GILT GROUP" zone wraps up viral and cross-channel drivers, while the "UPCOMING SALES CALENDAR" keeps designer druggies anticipating their next score.

As a person person, I am totally obsessed with the photo of the kitten with the bracelets. It makes me want to put chandelier earrings on my cats.

Marvelous, Wondrous

From: Anthropologie
Subject Line:Our niftiest gifts & cleverest contraptions.
Date: Wednesday, November 11, 2009

There's no lack of love for Anthropologie on this blog, but this gift guide in particular is really nicely done. I love the dimension created by the combination of art and photography and the way each tumbles over the other. Everything about the design of the email is fresh and, indeed, marvelous. I love how they've redesigned the little Twitter and Facebook icons at the bottom so they fit with the look of the email.

Another thing I appreciate about this is that it avoids Christmas clichés that, come November, seem to multiply like fruit flies in my inbox. After so many "Tis the Season" and "Holiday Cheer" emails, it is refreshing to open a beautifully designed email that takes a different approach. There's nothing wrong with seasonal advertising, but isn't it nice to see an ad that imagines a world where you give gifts just because you want to?


Did You Say Dancing Kitten?

From: fredflare.com
Subject Line: 30% OFF + a dancing kitten
Date: Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Check out this very cute and savvy Holiday Preview from Fred Flare. Do you want to see that dancing kitten? Yes! A million times yes!

I am always impressed by the way Fred Flare keeps things sweet and positive while maintaining a cheeky irreverence. Their emails are never short on delight, and this one is no exception. Here, they present a funny twist on the "favorite picks" trend with a list of gift suggestions picked out by the adorable Charlie Fuzzy Caterpillar. Click on his picture and you'll be taken to a cute series of photos of Charlie doing a pirouette. I'm hooked already!

Here's the sneaky part: by placing Charlie's photoshoot down the center of the page, the reader is prompted to keep scrolling until-voila!-they've viewed the entire blog post, which is chock-full of links to other parts of the website. Even though you've just viewed a lot of content, it doesn't feel like a trick.


Aaaah. Anthropologie.

From: Anthropologie
Subject Line: It must be October.
Date: October 1

It must be October. What a clever subject line. It's so simple, so relevant, and so unique. I've been meaning to blog about this email for a week now!  I know I sing Anthropologie's praises on a regular basis, but I just can't help myself. I'm addicted and I'm not the only one. Just this week I got a text from a friend that said: "Someone needs to do an intervention. At Anthropologie!! Help!"

The simplicity of this email's design and copy draws me in. Starting with the image, it supports the catalog creative brilliantly (check out above). And the copy: "Thirty-one days of craving, the cozy, the rugged, the refined" supports the subject line perfectly and creates a true story. Their call-to-actions are equally as beautiful, and the addition of the "Browse our October catalog" CTA presents a fantastic opportunity to engage their subscribers in an interactive way. Many online catalogs are clunky experiences, but their landing page is seamless.

What I was REALLY surprised to discover is that when I typed "boots" into the search box at the bottom, I was taken to a landing page with... boots! Instead of landing me on the homepage where I could retype my search word, they actually delivered on the promise. How novel.

What not to do...

From: ENTERTAINMENT WEEKLY Magazine
Subject Line: AMY, welcome to our EXCLUSIVE subscriber program!!
Date: Monday, October 5, 2009

This email failed on many levels. Overlooking the lack of design, the first thing I noticed was the single graphic: a Rush Hour 3 movie poster. Immediately I was confused why I was being emailed about a movie that was released over two years ago. When I read the copy it went on to mention even more movies that were long passed. The idea was to get me to register for an Advance Screening Program and was using these, out of date movies, as examples of the types of movies I could be seeing with this program.

Relevancy is VERY important in email to pull in subscribers. Would it really take that much time to update one image and one line of copy to make this offer more current? Sadly, this wasn't the end of my disappointment... as a fan of movies, this is an offer I potentially might be interested in, however, they failed to provide any type of link to actually register which was the entire point of the email.

If I had to think of something nice to say about this email, at least they took the time to include my name in the subject line and email. Although their subject line does "welcome" me to the program which sounds more like I'm already enrolled rather than an offer to sign up.

She's Got Designer Eyes


I've always been blown away by the way designers bring copy to life. The way they think is completely different than how I think. I think in black-and-white word docs; they think in color, color, color. Bringing these two ways of thinking together is what creates the perfect email.

Coach put a fresh step in my inbox with this newsletter. At first glance, I loved the way they gave the product silos in the hero some breathing space by not confining them to a box. That said, it also felt like too many tricks in one bag. To get the real scoop from a designer's POV, I enlisted Amy Hamilton, SH designer extraordinaire, to help me out with the 360-degree look at the creative.

Here's what she said:

My first thought when seeing this email was, WOW COOL, this is different! I immediately noticed the overlapping text, colors and imagery. Coach is definitely creating a style here.

However, after the initial WOW factor wore off, my eye wasn't sure where to go. The hero copy and right rail copy seemed to fight each other, and the lower half of the email felt a bit cluttered. The call to actions also fell pretty far below the fold. While this email has some nice and inventive approaches, I think it could use a little more focus. I would suggest:

  • Move a call-to-action above the fold
  • Create a primary message focus by expanding the hero image through to the left rail, or by bringing down the font size in the left rail so it's more obvious that it's a secondary message
  • Use a unified headline and copy treatment (as well as HTML text for body copy)
  • Clean up a bit of the cluttered imagery at the bottom

An Email Fashioned to Perfection

From: Saks Fifth Avenue
Subject Line: Harper's Bazaar picks Spring's best only at Saks
Date: September 23

On the heels of Fashion Week, this email couldn't be more perfectly timed or perfectly designed. I love that they avoided the boxy grid and messed things up a little. It has a fluidity to it that feels fresh. The copy is short and compelling, the call-to-action is clear, and the way they handled the partnership aspect of this email is really classy. Love how the Harper's Bazaar logo looks like it's actually part of the headline vs. being tacked on in an empty space. The secondary bonus message works really well in this email, too. Rather than go with a traditional boxed-in promo, they added some grit with a torn piece of paper.

Best of all, the landing page didn't disappoint. It was clean and compelling, highlighting the top five trends and giving me Glenda's take on each. And even though we're headed into fall, I could still shop each spring trend if I was so inclined.

Overall, Saks has definitely stepped up their email game by mixing product-focused messages
with
dedicated emails featuring editorial content, as you can see here and here. As a copywriter who believes there is always a story to tell beyond Free Shipping and SALE, I love it. 

A Newsletter Inspiration

From: Shutterfly
Subject Line: Get bright ideas for the holidays and more
Date: Thursday, September 24, 2009

I have to say I love this newsletter from Shutterly.

Visually:
It has a light & airy feel (which can be difficult with the amount of information packed into this email) with a punch of well-chosen colors. The imagery is well placed to draw the eye across and down the page. The content is engaging with a variety of topics from video and iphone apps to holiday reminders and coupons.

Best Standards:
It also hits the mark for email best standards with...
-- A full preheader of standard options
   (See Chad White's reportlet on popular preheader elements)
-- HTML body text
-- Alt tags on graphic headlines & images
--Standard newsletter "In this Issue" (table of contents) located above-the-fold
--Website navigation in the header
--Legal footer & opt out information

My Suggestions:
--Try the navigation in HTML text
--Use a standard button treatment throughout
--Try using the space at the bottom (where the header is repeated)
   as a recovery module with additional link options.

I give this email 5 hearts!






Best Practices: HTML Text & Alt Tags

From: Forever21
Subject Line: Tough Love - Shop Leather
Date: Tuesday, September 1, 2009

What was this email about? I'll never know. I can't stress enough how important it is to use HTML text in designs, or at the very least alt tags on images with graphical text to convey your message/s. This is vital for subscribers that have images disabled as well as when an error occurs, keeping your images from displaying properly. When all else fails, it's always good to have a link to a web/hosted version of the email. Unfortunately, even the hosted version of the email wasn't working.

Cutest Image Ever!

From: crewcuts
Subject Line: the new crewcuts catalog is here
Date: Friday, July 31, 2009

I must admit, I got a wee bit teary-eyed at how adorable this image is. It is just so darn sweet! I love how, not only do the BFFs have their hair braided together, but that it all comes together in a heart shape!  :)

BTW, this was the first time since the post Holiday sales that I've clicked through on a J.Crew email. I know that I tend to hold a service grudge longer than necessary, but I was completely in the mood to buy a winter coat and A) their website at the time was very un-user friendly and B) when I went to complete my order, their shopping cart was "experiencing technical difficulties" which prevented me from following through. A lost opportunity for them! Their website looks to be much improved now (with the helpful sub-category of sizes in the sale section), but OUCH! they are still kinda pricey!

Hang Out in the Hollister Lounge

From: Hollister
Subject Line: Have you heard our new tracks?
Date: July 21, 2009

Super-cool idea. Not-so-super-cool execution. The concept of creating a "lounge" on the Hollister site where Dudes and Bettys can listen to tunes is fantastic. Unfortunately, there are some glitches in the experience.

Glitch #1: When I clicked from the email, it took me to the homepage, rather than landing me in the lounge. Glitch #2: A streaming video with sound that has absolutely nothing to do with the music automatically starts playing and continues to play even when I click on one of the bands. It's chaotic. Glitch #3: I wish the album cover would pop up in the HUGE video space available on the page, rather than this dinky little pop-up window. It'd also be cool if they had a bunch of info about the band and their music influences.

On the plus side, I got to hear the entire song vs. just a snippet and they do have links to the band sites. All in all, I wish they'd dialed this experience in like they did for www.hcoridethewave.com.

Creating Brand Personalities

From: Serena & Lily
Subject Line: See what Serena hearts...
Date: July 8, 2009

From: Serena & Lily
Subject Line: See what Lily loves...
Date: July 14, 2009





In keeping with the J.Crew email I blogged about a few weeks ago, I'm totally into this idea of hearing what the minds behind the designs are loving about their own collections. For me, it turns these emails from Serena & Lily into a mini magazine spread, like something I'd see in Cookie. They're colorful, beautiful, and short on copy. Very compelling. The Serena & Lily customer is definitely high-end and they do count a few celebrities as their biggest fans, so offering up a special deal or free shipping would feel off-brand with such an editorial-themed email, IMHO. They know who they are and they deliver that brand beautifully. I'm wondering if there aren't more brands out there that could identify a visionary in their own ranks and create a content strategy around him or her? For example, I'd love to hear from Anthropologie's creative director. I'd love to have her email me with her (or his) inspirations. What brands would you want the insider's POV on? 

Breaking the Grid

From: Pumpkin Patch USA
Subject Line: up to 50% off summer must haves, in store & online
Date: Wednesday, May 27, 2009

From: Gymboree
Subject Line: New For You This Summer! Fresh Styles & Further Savings
Date: Tuesday, May 26, 2009

From: Sur La Table
Subject Line: Top Tools for the Grill - Shipped Free
Date: Friday, May 22, 2009

From: Shutterfly
Subject Line: Knock Dad's socks off and save 25%.
Date:Thursday, May 21, 2009

From: Endless.com
Subject Line: Last Minute Weekend Plans? We've Got Free Overnight Shipping
Date: Thursday, May 21, 2009

From: Naturalizer
Subject Line: Summer Sandals Starting at Only $39.99
Date: Thursday, May 21, 2009

Conforming to a grid template has its advantages: availability for dynamic product images, speedy production time, brand consistency, etc. But try to throw in a wild card once in a while to keep subscribers from getting bored and to grab their attention. Here are a few ideas: spice up your emails with overlapping & angled images.


Crossing the Line













From: Abercrombie & Fitch
Subject Line: New for Summer.
Date: Thursday, March 26, 2009

From: Abercrombie & Fitch
Subject Line: Post-Grad by Abercrombie & Fitch
Date: Tuesday, April 7, 2009

From: Abercrombie & Fitch
Subject Line: The Cheeky Cousin of Abercrombie & Fitch
Date: Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Each Abercrombie & Fitch email I receive violates my comfort more than the last. I'm at the point of considering unsubscribing due to the graphic content. I would be curious to find out how successful these campaigns are. I can't even tell what they're advertising - 2 of the 3 don't even have a call-to-action.

Share your thoughts: Are they going too far, or does sex sell???


Happy Colors

From: Lands' End
Subject Line: Free Shipping + save 4 ways for 4 days
Date: Friday, May 15, 2009

This Email creative just sort of jumped out at me and made me happy! It's very simple, yet somehow the layout of the circles and the colorfulness completely drew me in (which is saying something a lot for a Sale creative). They did a nice job on the visual! Now, HTML text would have improved it from a best practices standpoint, but that's another blog...  :)
From: introducing our first ever crewcuts catalog + free shipping
Subject Line: J.Crew
Date: Friday, May 1, 2009

I am all about beauty and brains.
This image has both.
(1) It's delightful with sorbet colors, chalk swirls and jungle animals.
(2) It tells a story: this girl is sitting on her brothers' skateboard in her SoCal driveway. Those are his jungle animals. Those are her chalk drawings. She's so proud of her jewels and her tutu.
(3) It sells: the accessories, the clothes and the shoes are unmistakably crewcuts, and will make your kids' life - and your life - as smooth as strawberry sorbet.

This email message also includes a "View this email on a mobile device" link. For the uninitiated: for now, this is how a "mobile version" should look (at right.) Simple to do, right? Go for it, all! Only I think J.Crew is being a little too eager putting the mobile link as the first element of the preheader. I'm interested in what portion of audiences are clicking on this link from brand to brand. Have any input for us?

I would probably dress just like this every day if I could, only none of you would take me very seriously ;).

All the better to...

From: Coach
Subject Line: have you seen it? the new coach.com
Date: Monday, April 4, 2009

Coach.com announced their website revamp via email this morning. In contrast to the very focused approach taken by Williams-Sonoma in 2008, Coach's message is an explosion of screenshots and pink. While I could go on about the lack of standard logo and navigation, the unfortunate, not-so-easy-to-read tiny graphical text and the endless scrolling, that would just be boring. By now, we've all taken a trip on the best practices train to 516 W34th Street and back. (Check out our Email Insider "Break the Rules" article for more on this topic.) What I like about this email is that while it's absolutely overflowing with content and screengrabs, it's also overflowing with enthusiasm and excitement. I get the sense that Coach is excited about the new coach.com, and therefore, so am I. As an email viewer, do I have the patience to actually squint through the fine print and all the little screenshots? Not so much. But I am inspired to click through and check out the new website (and I'm not really even a Coach shopper), so in essence, this email has more than done it's job.

I like to make this analogy: a promotional retail email should act like a retail store window. It needs to be compelling enough to bring passers-by inside.


Forced Perspective

From: The Ritz-Carlton
Subject Line: The Ritz-Carlton Provides a Romantic Western Getaway
Date:Wednesday, February 11, 2009

This caught my eye for a number of reasons. A few (ahem!) years ago, in my life before Email Marketing, I used to work for The Ritz-Carlton (to this day I still say "my pleasure" in place of "you're welcome"). Naturally, I have been on the lookout for Email campaigns from The Ritz (and having high expectations for them!). This is the first one that I have personally received from them. I really like the main visual, which particularly stands out to me, because I just learned from my husband (whose latest hobby is making short films) that the term for this type of camera shot is called Forced Perspective. Aside from the wonderful hero image however, I think The Ritz has room for improvement (or an opportunity, as they would call it) for the overall layout. I know the R-C is very conservative, but the header logo area is just boring, the subject line is uninspired and the banners need a complete makeover IMHO. :)

Why?









From: abercrombie
Subject Line: get the coolest fleece by christmas.
Date:Thursday, December 11, 2008

From: abercrombie
Subject Line: winter coats to keep you warm.
Date:Thursday, October 30, 2008

From: abercrombie
Subject Line: classic fleece to keep you warm.
Date:Thursday, October 9, 2008

From: abercrombie
Subject Line: classic fleece to keep you warm.
Date:Thursday, September 4, 2008

From: abercrombie
Subject Line: get the coolest new looks for fall.
Date:Thursday, September 18, 2008

Since I started subscribing to abercrombie kids email, I've been seeing the same girl and boy models over and over. This isn't too strange--some of my favorite brands like Free People and Anthropologie also feature familiar faces across multiple creatives. What's baffling about these abercrombie photos is that it's the same kid, wearing the same thing, in the same location--sometimes even the same photo used again and again? Why is this? Is the boy just so adorable in this flannel shirt that he generates more click-throughs than displaying a variety of clothing or range of environmental shots?

This isn't the first time we've been baffled by Abercrombie & Fitch's email creatives, as you can see in other entries. Are they going for irony? Are they being lazy? Does this approach really work? We're not sure. If anyone has any insight, please tell us...why??

Get the scoop on 2008 Retail Email Trends

From: Smith-Harmon
Subject Line: Retail Email Year-End Trends for 2008
Date: January 6, 2009

If you're in the midst of planning your 2009 email marketing strategy, this free reportlet from Chad White, Smith-Harmon's research director, is a definite must-read. It's packed with stats, trends and charts about the overall retail email volume, frequency and timing among the top online retailers in 2008. Want to know which days of the week were most popular to send retail emails? Interested in the top 20 retail email days of the year? Ready to learn what the SECOND biggest retail email season was, behind Christmas? Fasten your seatbelt and get ready for a few surprises.

Download the free reportlet now to get the panoramic view of what happened in the world of retail email in 2008.


Fashionably Late? Or Just Late?

From: Tommy Bahama
Subject Line: Relax
Date: January 5, 2009

I love the imagery and sentiment of this Tommy Bahama email, which hit my inbox today. On the plus side, it totally makes me want to plan a mid-winter escape to some place warm and sunny. On the down side, I think they should have dropped the "spirit of the season" idea and focused on "Happy New Year". The holidays are definitely over, so the copy of this email feels a little late to the party. Kudos to the subject line though, which simply says: Relax. The perfect mantra for the first back at my desk.


Dressing up for the junkyard

From: Bebe
Subject Line: Shop party dresses: holiday favorites and styles under $100
Date: Tuesday, November 11, 2008

From: Bebe
Subject Line: Get dressed for 30% LESS! Enjoy a limited-time offer on ALL your favorite dress styles.
Date: Tuesday, November 18, 2008

I get a lot of emails featuring models in formal dresses. I usually don't pay much attention to them because they aren't very visually interesting and because I don't attend many events that call for fancy garb. While the layout of these bebe emails is simple and similar to others, their industrial environmental shots are eye-grabbing. The sharp contrast between the delicate models in their sleek dresses and the urban junkyard scenes lets the dresses dazzle, and the story-spinning part of my mind wonders what's taken these ladies out into the dark parts of town in such sparkling apparel. bebe's imaginative angle is a worthy challenge for others to step it up and spice up their messages without having to go too crazy with layouts.

Old Navy Image

From: Old Navy
Subject Line: The 40% Off Baby Sale, Plus a Special Deal for Adults
Date: Friday, September 5, 2008

I had to blog on this just because I thought the picture was so stinkin' cute!! How in the world did they get that little boy to pose like that?!

Bare Feet

From: Michael Kors
Subject Line: Now online: The NEW Spring Catalog
Date: Tuesday, March 4, 2008

After a very rainy winter in Seattle, and in an inbox full of emails about shoes, I have to say I found this image of bare feet really refreshing. It's not that often that you get an email that actually shows feet. Think about it. It's stimulating, remembering what it feels like to walk around barefoot outside.


Enviro-Silo Photo Mix

From: Coach
Subject Line: Introducing Signature Stripe: Online Today and In Stores Monday
Date: Friday, February 8, 2008

I'm a fan of the enviro-silo photo mix. Square-cut environment shots set the mood, bring lifestyle into the design and show product in use, while silhouette photography is great for featuring product details and close-ups. Visually, adding silos to the mix (as opposed to a grid of many square-cut shots) opens up the design and keeps file size light. Try it, you'll like it ;)!


Hello, color!

From: Piperlime
Subject Line: Say hello to color!
Date: Thursday, January 31, 2008

This is a fantastic example of imagery, copy and content aligning to create a delightful user experience. Heck, it's just plain happy. I love rainbows! And patent leather! I really want a purple patent leather Mulberry Bayswater bag right now.

Piperlime generally does a good job with photography, propping their product in playful ways that make imagery relevant to messaging. Sign up for their emails if you're looking for product photography inspiration.


Towels in the Tub

From: Brocade Home
Subject Line: Save Up to 40% on Rugs & More
Date: Thursday, January 10, 2008

From: Garnet Hill
Subject Line: Soak it Up - Save 30% on Our Signature Towels
Date: Friday, January 11, 2008

Here, Brocade Home and Garnet Hill come up against a common challenge: depicting a textile in multiple colorways.

Brocade Home's rugs are not only poorly cropped; they also appear to need vacuuming. (Thanks to Smith-Harmonite Sarah Milsow for that particular callout!) I personally love a little frill - I'm a fan of the brand - but I'd like to see BH do something more exciting with their email creative. They have an opportunity to bring the Baroque ornamentation their brand is famous for into their creative in a much more dynamic way.

Moving on to Garnet Hill: love the towels in the tub. I feel like I get emails from Restoration Hardware pretty much every day featuring vertical towel stacks; it's fun to see them featured differently here.

Who Nose?

From: fredflare.com
Subject Line: you have a nose for NEW...
Date: Thursday, January 10, 2008

This is rather bizarre!


Shelf-Improvement

From: Abercrombie & Fitch
Subject Line: Exactly What They Want.
Date: Wednesday, December 5, 2007

From: FreePeople.com
Subject Line: Our Gift to You: Free Shipping!
Date: Monday, December 17, 2007

Here, I like how Abercrombie and Free People photographed a holiday gift mix on shelves and in cabinets. It gives the product more of an environmental, in-store feeling. Although these montage-type photos become difficult when one of the items featured goes out of stock!

I also can't resist but mention the "Our Gift to You" verbiage in the Free People subject line. Those most be four of the most overused words in holiday email, particularly when associated with Free Shipping. The thing is, they're rather charming and convenient! Please let me know if you've found something equally-useful and cute to communicate the same meaning; I'd love to hear some other options!

A Unique Vision for Holiday

From: katespade.com
Subject Line: shop pop & color
Date: Tuesday, November 20 2007

I agree with Shannon Milar, who loves this message for it's "unique vision for holiday." Like kate spade's fall imagery, their holiday photography feels fresh and fun. It's so easy for us to fall into blahliday mode, slavishly aping last year's creative (only redder!), but this campaign illustrates the opportunity to consider how we can mix our unique brand elements with traditional holiday visual cues to bake up something new.


Open Door Policy

From: Bluefly
Subject Line: Exclusive Access to the Blue Room - Extra 20% off Today Only
Date: Tuesday, November 6 2007

We often talk about emails as doorways into websites; I enjoy this creative illustration of that concept. The idea of "Exclusive Access to the Blue Room" intrigues me; I feel compelled to take hold of those gold handles and throw the blue doors open!


Wendy Learns from Kate

From: Built by Wendy
Subject Line: Anchor Print
Date: Tuesday, May 1, 2007

From: kate spade
Subject Line: classic elegance - shop new sunglass arrivals
Date: Tuesday, April 17, 2007

These images look like they could have been on the same roll of film. I love the colors and the environment in both. In fact, the designs are similar in many respects as well. Both feature a single hero image, a logo with no menu navigation, and a few words of text on a white background.

Wendy could learn three things from Kate:
1) Kate includes a category-specific call-to-action: "shop sunglasses", as opposed to a single product name: "Anchor Print". Wendy need only add the word "shop" or a carrot to increase clickthrough.
2) Kate's design is more visually sophisticated. A few subtle touches - the headline-over-hero overlay, the college-ruled paper graphic and the typewriter font - make for a tighter and more engaging campaign.
3) Everybody loves a story. Rolling kate spade sunglasses into a Newport story put them into context - a lifestyle, a world. The anecdote gives them an air of mystery and exclusivity. It's a fantasy we can imagine and, once properly sunglass-ed, inhabit.

Mum Says: "Two Thumbs Up!"

From: CB2
Subject Line: modern dinnerware in bloom
Date: Tuesday, April 17, 2007

I'd like to give CB2 a standing ovation for their work on this campaign. They took a relatively run-of-the-mill product - "verde dinnerware" - and married it to both the season and a holiday (Mother's Day) through photography and copy. As far as effectively using what we have at our creative disposal to form a coherent, visually-appealing, relevant message, this EDM is one of the few to make it into the same league as Apple's legendary February 2006 "In the Ear" campaign. It should inspire all of us to put more forethough and preparation into our email creative. Thank you CB2!

Shooting Specifically for Email

From: shopbop.com
Subject Line: Gleaming Accents: Sunglasses, Shoes, Handbags & Jewelry
Date: Monday, April 2, 2007

What could be smarter than an email promoting four low pricepoint, high margin accessories categories? Being prepared enough to coordinate it! I want to mention shopbop again as being one of the best examples of a retailer who approaches photo intelligently. They shoot product across a span of categories and sources in the same environment, allowing them to successfully weave disparate items into tight visual stories, thereby managing to avoid the dreaded "garage sale" look of a cobbled-together campaign that has the marketing message down, but not the assets necessary to address it cohesively. I am a big proponent of shooting specifically for the email channel; it makes sense to push for it as email marketing continues to drive a larger and larger percentage of ecom sales.

Lighten up!

From: gap.com
Subject Line: Lighten Up for Spring
Date: Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Someone needs to tell this model to lighten up. Honestly, she does not look psyched about her khakis. Let's try to keep our copy and imagery synchronous. Otherwise we're saying "no" when we really mean "yes", right?

Refreshing

From: CB2
Subject Line: wait til you see this chair
Date: Tuesday, March 6, 2007

This campaign from CB2 is a breath of fresh air. It's simple, bright, seasonally-appropriate, and just plain happy. And the subtle butterfly animation makes the whole thing that much more "just so." There's a tangible sense of creative and marketing teams getting excited behind this one, and subscribers can feel that. You guys win the spring spirit award this week for sure.

A Familiar Face

From: shopbop.com
Subject Line: Trend Alert: Wide-Leg Pants, Vintage & Navy for Spring at shopbop.com
Date: Tuesday, March 6, 2007

Those of you who receive email updates from shopbop.com are probably familiar with this face. This redhead has been appearing in shopbop's campaigns consistently for as long as I can remember. I'd thought I was sick of seeing her day-in and day-out (Like, can't shopbop afford a second model?) until, recently, she began appearing less. Opening campaigns to find random brunettes and blondes, I found myself missing the redhead - as though my personal rappaport with the face of shopbop was left dangling. When we were finally reunited with this campaign on March 6, I was embarrased to find myself feeling quite content.

(I'd like to think) I'm not alone in my imagined internal dialogues with said redhead. But even if my particular experience is more ridiculous than most, the big-picture reminder here is that your customers - the most "die hard" in particular - are looking to your brand for a sense of continuity. They want consistent visual and verbal cues. They want a solid relationship. They've bonded to your imagery, your voice and your design - that's one of the reasons they are "buyers." So be careful and gentle when you make changes to your email creative. And have good reasons for changing direction. Don't switch things up just because you as a marketer are personally sick of the proverbial redhead.

Holiday Photography

From: American Eagle Outfitters
Subject Line: Get Gifted with Great Gifts under $30
Date: Wednesday, December 13, 2006

While it's a challenge we face all year long, avoiding the dreaded "garage sale" mish-mash of product photography becomes particularly difficult during holiday, when strategy calls for random groupings of product to be featured together under various promotional umbrellas such as "free shipping" or, in this case, "under $30". But American Eagle Outfitters has done something extremely intelligent in order to avoid that. They've photographed all of their giftable product in a super-holiday environment, which, rather than playing up the "garage sale" factor effectively neutralizes it. Think about the amount of work and hassle this saves: creative no longer needs to fake backgrounds to make products shot in different environments look as though they were shot at the same location; business and creative don't have to argue about what products can be tastefully featured in tandem. This is total genius! Let it inspire us all to do better photo planning for Holiday 2007. Let's photograph absolutely everything in front of a Christmas tree, then rest just a little easier for the the rest of the holiday season. High five, AE!

P.S. AE, if you actually did a great job of PhotoShopping these products onto this background, think of how much easier it would have been if you'd photographed them all this way in the first place!

Creepy Quints

From: FreePeople.com
Subject Line: For the Season In Between
Date: Tuesday, July 18 2006

Come play with us, Danny...

Delivering a Demon

From: Saks Fifth Avenue
Subject Line: EMAIL INVITATION ONLY: Vince Fall 2006 Trunk Show
Date: Tuesday, May 16, 2006

While Saks campaigns are generally dull, this one is slightly frightening. Pay attention to imagery! Rather than inspiring folks to attend the Vince Trunk Show, the model pictured here, looking actually possessed, is acting as a major deterrent.

While we are intimately familiar with our product, imagery, and models, we have to remember that our customers are not. A normally beautiful woman can look awful and a usually gorgeous dress can look wrinkled, so do examine imagery carefully (or have a more objective person take a look) before delivering a demon. We cannot allow our familiarity to eclipse our discrimination.

I wanted the handbag, not the trenchcoat!

From: Burberry
Subject Line: Gifts for Her and complimentary shipping from Burberry.com
Date: Friday, April 21, 2006

Wow, she sure doesn't seem too pscyhed about her gift, does she? Maybe she's upset about receiving a wintercoat in the spring. Burberry has been using this model for almost every EDM I've received this season. Maybe she's getting tired.

Lighten Up

From: Athleta.com
Subject Line: Surf's Up and so is Athleta's New Summer Lineup
Date: Tuesday, April 4, 2006

While I find Athleta's consistent use of full-width outdoor photography appropriate to their product, the images are consistently undersaturated and dull, begging for whiter whites and brighter colors. Notice how the surf in this shot is a dull grey? It's depressing. Now imagine it a crystal blue. This is a happier picture: infinitely more effective. It's all about the PhotoShop Hue/Saturation, baby.

Additionally, I'm curious about the use of capitalization in the main body text. We should be grammatically incorrect only when it benefits the overall aesthetic or meaning of the message. I don't think miscapitalization improves this campaign in any way.

Blue Space

From: adidas Online Store
Subject Line: adidas by Stella McCartney Spring Collection has arrived
Date: Friday, March 17, 2006

Love the use of whitespace (or blue space, rather) in this design.

Totally not my area of expertise, but how does it make sense for Stella McCartney to design for adidas?

Strange Scents

From: Burberry
Subject Line: Children’s Apparel, Accessories and Fragrance
Date: Thursday, March 16, 2006

The unearthly halo and black, pupil-less eyes make this baby look downright creepy.

I get it that retailers want to profit on the celebrity-fueled "it's hip to have babies" trend. Babies in tartan plaid are one thing, but baby FRAGRANCE!?

A Picture's Worth...

From: west elm
Subject Line: Best-Sellers: bedroom storage + 20% off jute boucle rugs
Date: Wednesday, March 15, 2006

west elm is one of my favorite furniture brands; they've really been pioneers when it comes to trends in home furnishings. When they initially introduced chocolate-finish furniture I found it distasteful, but now, a few years later, the rest of the market has "caught up" and everyone's featuring it, and I'm itching to replace my blonde-finish bedroom.

The imagery in this EDM showcases the storage sets nicely; we get a great sense for two entire collections in one shot. Unfortunately, as dark wood finish is notoriously difficult to capture on film, the pieces do look a little "black" and lack differentiation; shoppers may be reluctant to purchase a product they can't really "see". This is something that could have been fixed easily using PhotoShop curves and saturation settings.
From: The Land of Nod
Subject Line: Calling all piggy toes. Calling all piggy toes.
Date: Tuesday, March 7, 2006

This email was brought to my attention by a colleague. Thank you!

The Land of Nod always seems to walk the razor's edge as far as copy goes. While employing the current energy crisis to drive rug sales is brilliant, "piggy toes" is just annoying. I agree with my colleague concerning the rug photography here. Notably difficult to depict online, The Land of Nod has done a wonderful job here showcasing their rugs. Nice work.

On another note, I'd like to make a general observation concerning Tuesdays: I'm not sure they're the best day to launch email campaigns anymore. While I received only 3 EDMs on Monday, I received 13 Tuesday, and, even as a self-described EDM Freak, did not get through all of them. How much more would this be true for the average consumer? Hmm... are Wednesdays the new Tuesday? Let me know what you think.

Easter Greetings from the Damned

From: Gymboree
Subject Line: NEW! Dress up for Easter and $5 Flat-Rate Shipping!
Date: Thursday, March 2, 2006

Wow, looks like the Children of the Corn are celebrating Easter this year! The graphical treatments used here are happy and holiday-appropropriate, however the photography is, in my opinion, downright strange.

Manzilla

From: BananaRepublic.com
Subject Line: New spring polos + get 15% off...
Date: Tuseday, February 28, 2006

Ahhhh! Attack of the enormous scary Willem Dafoe-like Raptor Man! I promise, I'll buy as many polos as you want. Just let me live!

Seriously though, that hero image is enormous. Too big? What do we think?

Ann Taylor in the Spring

From: Ann Taylor
Subject Line: The New Collection is Here, with an Exclusive Offer
Date: Tuseday, February 28, 2006

This is a such nice, clean creative execution. It has a light, refined quality that really says "Ann Taylor in the Spring." I think it captures the overall brand cleanup that's been happening recently at Ann Taylor.

On a separate note, since January, Ann Taylor has been doing a notable job executing multiple messages within each campaign. This email manages to address the Spring Collection, a Shoe Sale AND an Online Sale without overwhelming viewers. A rare achievement. Bravo, Ann.

One recommendation for improvement: the New Arrivals main message features the PETITE call-to-action so prominently, we loose sight of the opportunity to click through to the main collection. The two call-outs should really be given equal weight.

Crackozian Style

From: Anthropologie.com
Subject Line: a vision of summer...
Date: Thursday, February 23, 2006

Anthropologie is actually my favorite store, but this is a "vision of summer" I could do without. Yikes! Since when did Crackozian Refuges living in tenements have enough money to spend several hundred dollars on a smock?

Rainbow Tees

From: Abercrombie & Fitch
Subject Line: New at Abercrombie & Fitch
Date: Tuesday, February 2, 2006

Although I do have objections to Abercrombie & Fitch's usual soft-core porn approach, I like the use of rainbow imagery in this particular message. A grudging "good job". One recommendation for improvement: add more obvious click-throughs to the mens and womens collections.

The Subject Line calls out what's "New at Abercrombie & Fitch", so it would have been appropriate to add "shop mens" and "shop womens" links.

Radioactive Meat

From: Safeway.com
Subject Line: We Deliver Your Football Party
Date: Wednesday, January 25, 2006

This EDM came to my attention via a colleague - thank you!
I'm not an expert on Football or Deli Trays, but this is some of the weirdest imagery I've ever seen. At first I wasn't sure if it was a gag, but it's true, the glowing deli tray is hovering over a football field.

Chad, Darling

From: Brooks Brothers
Subject Line: Spring 2006 and Suit Savings at Brooks Brothers
Date: Thursday, January 19, 2006

Muffy love, have you seen where I parked the yacht?
Seriously though, Brooks Brothers EDMs are consistenly sharp and effective, and this one is no exception. They sweat the details, and it shows. Nice work, Chad!

Bright and Delicious

From: Williams-Sonoma
Subject Line: Last-Minute Easter Savings at Williams-Sonoma Stores
Date: Thursday, March 24, 2005

Williams-Sonoma food photography is consistently great. This looks delicious!

Breezy and Calm

From: west elm
Subject Line: shop our new design favorites for summer
Date: Wednesday, June 23, 2004

I love this EDM because the window sheers image is so beautiful. This may or may not have been a huge revenue-driver, but this is very strong, brand-building imagery.